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While the labels attempt to ground us in Luskan, the architecture is a chaotic jumble of logic where bridges terminate into solid rock and ships fuse with the very quays they should be moored at. This vibrant, sun-drenched aesthetic is an insult to the 'Shadow of the Void' you describe; there is no visual weight of the entropy or the Star-Touched whispers that should be haunting these streets. A city at the edge of reality's crack needs to look the part, not appear like a generic, brightly-lit trade hub. You have provided a postcard when we required a testament to the encroaching darkness.

You present a pristine scroll of Luskan from the *Sword Coast Adventurer's Guide* (p. 95), yet your narrative claims 'entropy bleeds through the cracks of reality.' Per the *Dungeon Master’s Guide* (p. 248), a map must provide a 'clear picture of the environment,' but this vibrant trade hub shows zero evidence of the Void or the Star-Touched whispers you describe. Providing a generic, labeled city map while demanding the atmosphere of an eldritch apocalypse is a failure of thematic consistency. To use the City of Sails as a stand-in for the Shattered Gate without altering its visual identity is to misguide your party's senses.